The Elements Review: Interwoven Tales of Pain

Young Freya stays with her preoccupied mother in Cornwall when she comes across teenage twins. "The only thing better than knowing a secret," they inform her, "comes from possessing one of your own." In the time that ensue, they sexually assault her, then inter her while living, combination of nervousness and annoyance flitting across their faces as they finally liberate her from her temporary coffin.

This could have served as the disturbing centrepiece of a novel, but it's only one of numerous horrific events in The Elements, which assembles four novelettes – published distinctly between 2023 and 2025 – in which characters negotiate historical pain and try to achieve peace in the present moment.

Debated Context and Subject Exploration

The book's release has been overshadowed by the addition of Earth, the subsequent novella, on the candidate list for a prominent LGBTQ+ writing prize. In August, nearly all other contenders dropped out in objection at the author's debated views – and this year's prize has now been terminated.

Debate of LGBTQ+ matters is missing from The Elements, although the author addresses plenty of big issues. Anti-gay prejudice, the influence of traditional and social media, family disregard and abuse are all investigated.

Multiple Narratives of Suffering

  • In Water, a grieving woman named Willow moves to a secluded Irish island after her husband is jailed for horrific crimes.
  • In Earth, Evan is a athlete on legal proceedings as an accessory to rape.
  • In Fire, the grown-up Freya juggles retaliation with her work as a surgeon.
  • In Air, a father journeys to a memorial service with his teenage son, and ponders how much to reveal about his family's past.
Pain is accumulated upon trauma as hurt survivors seem fated to encounter each other repeatedly for all time

Related Narratives

Connections proliferate. We first meet Evan as a boy trying to escape the island of Water. His trial's group contains the Freya who returns in Fire. Aaron, the father from Air, collaborates with Freya and has a child with Willow's daughter. Secondary characters from one account resurface in cottages, pubs or legal settings in another.

These storylines may sound tangled, but the author is skilled at how to propel a narrative – his prior popular Holocaust drama has sold many copies, and he has been converted into numerous languages. His straightforward prose bristles with thriller-ish hooks: "in the end, a doctor in the burns unit should understand more than to play with fire"; "the primary step I do when I come to the island is change my name".

Personality Portrayal and Storytelling Strength

Characters are sketched in brief, impactful lines: the caring Nigerian priest, the troubled pub landlord, the daughter at struggle with her mother. Some scenes ring with melancholy power or observational humour: a boy is punched by his father after wetting himself at a football match; a narrow-minded island mother and her Dublin-raised neighbour swap barbs over cups of watery tea.

The author's knack of bringing you fully into each narrative gives the comeback of a character or plot strand from an previous story a genuine frisson, for the opening times at least. Yet the aggregate effect of it all is desensitizing, and at times practically comic: trauma is layered with pain, coincidence on coincidence in a dark farce in which wounded survivors seem fated to meet each other continuously for forever.

Conceptual Complexity and Concluding Evaluation

If this sounds less like life and resembling purgatory, that is element of the author's point. These wounded people are weighed down by the crimes they have suffered, caught in patterns of thought and behavior that churn and spiral and may in turn harm others. The author has discussed about the effect of his individual experiences of abuse and he portrays with compassion the way his cast navigate this risky landscape, striving for solutions – solitude, frigid water immersion, resolution or bracing honesty – that might let light in.

The book's "elemental" concept isn't terribly instructive, while the brisk pace means the examination of sexual politics or digital platforms is primarily surface-level. But while The Elements is a flawed work, it's also a completely readable, victim-focused saga: a appreciated rebuttal to the typical obsession on investigators and offenders. The author demonstrates how trauma can permeate lives and generations, and how years and tenderness can quieten its aftereffects.

Dr. Beth White
Dr. Beth White

An experienced educator and digital learning specialist passionate about making online education accessible and effective for all learners.